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He told me not to pick roses


because beautiful things are fragile


and they are fast to break.


He then asked me if I was broken yet


I picked a rose with a lot of thorns


I left it upside down to dry out


When it was done I gave it to him


and I said


I'm still put together

I am not broken

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AngerIssues1234 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Friend, you're such a fabulous writer!
(I'm kinda maybe sorta reading all your stuff; your really good!)
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brownhairedmaiden Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
oh thank you!!
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AngerIssues1234 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! :)
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AngerIssues1234 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*you're
I'm an idiot, ahaha.
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Roses are like love, fragile with sharp thorns; but if handled with care, it will never wither. You did an excellent job. Bravo!
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Wolfgang627 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist
this is amazing
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PurpleRayRomeo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow this is beautiful <3
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